Revise Writing Question

The assignment has already been completed by another tutor which has been attached in the document titled revise_drug_and_alcohol_dependence_critique, however, there are some things that need to be revised. The big issue is that it is not following the format of the article_critique_example document. For example, the introduction and thesis in paragraph 1 are not structured like article_critique_example and the thesis especially does not follow the same format as the example and should mention three critiques which have to be in epidemiology terms. There should only be one summary paragraph, which should be paragraph 2, yet there are two paragraphs for the summary. Paragraphs 3-5 which are the critique paragraphs and are too short.