The file that is attached is my rough draft.\u00a0 The instructions are listed below.\u00a0 Also will be ataching the comments from my feedback that needs to be crrected for this assignment.\u00a0 Thank you!!
Assignment Description
Based on the feedback you have received on your introduction paragraph, begin writing a 3\u20134-page rough draft of the body paragraphs of your research paper, which should have a clear focus, problems and solutions, and reliable\/scholarly sources as support. You should have a good supply of research notes to bring into each of your arguments. Be sure your rough draft includes the following:
An introduction that has been revised based on prior feedback
Body paragraphs organized around focused analysis and supporting evidence for each of the key points that you are researching
In-text citations and a reference page to document the sources being used <\/p>\n
THIS IS THE FEEDBACK\u00a0***NOTE: You will re-use and improve upon this exact same paper in IP3 in the following sequence:\u00a0\u00a0https:\/\/drive.google.com\/file\/d\/1v6uAvECj1zvmd5kFzBhFu-gj-akH056V\/view?usp=sharing
This is a good job on identifying a criminal justice topic to study for the remainder of this course. You will use the exact same topic in assignments 3 and 4 (a PowerPoint) and 5. Below are recommendations that should be applied to your IP3 paper.\u00a0 Here are your next steps:
For your Unit 3 paper, correct ALL of the identified errors in the IP1 paper. The errors will be listed in the grade book and\/or they will be emailed to you.
Add an introductory paragraph and a conclusion paragraph into your IP3 paper. Here is a sneak preview of your IP3 instructions:\u00a0https:\/\/drive.google.com\/file\/d\/1H8aYQ66iysFXqsAAypgeMlukePlW2FYN\/view?usp=sharing
When you are finished editing your IP1 paper, then re-upload it as your IP3 paper.
Below are administrative recommendations that should be applied to your final IP3 paper. Keep up the good work.
SYNTAX: The following has a weak English syntax: \u00a0
[People will look at another and just based on their skin color they have their reservations about the This is an act that needs to stop and people need to understand that all people bleed the same color red, just the outside is a little different.\u00a0 ]
And:
[If racial profiling were to change then there would be a decrease in arrest around the Unite states.\u00a0 ]
And:
[Also, if there was awareness about officers decimating against other races then other people standing by can voice their thought to try and make it stop.\u00a0 ]
There are other sentence structure issues that won’t be pointed out here. If you would like to learn how to improve the syntax in your papers, then please visit this link: https:\/\/drive.google.com\/file\/d\/1rsnM6BLFJJSHN8cV8pG0crPEs_paAhAg\/view?usp=sharing\u00a0 (5\u00a0 points). \u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0
MEASUREMENTS<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"
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