{"id":8132,"date":"2020-08-04T19:31:43","date_gmt":"2020-08-04T19:31:43","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/papersspot.com\/blog\/?p=8132"},"modified":"2020-08-04T19:31:45","modified_gmt":"2020-08-04T19:31:45","slug":"review-and-edit","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/papersspot.com\/blog\/2020\/08\/04\/review-and-edit\/","title":{"rendered":"Review and Edit"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p>Review and Edit<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>I first walked into a hospital in Anse-Rouge (Haiti), when I was 16 years of age. I had<br>visited my brother Billy who had developed a fever and had difficulty breathing. For a hospital<br>that had one doctor for thirty patients, I recall many patients went unattended for quite a while.<br>Puzzled with this reality I felt a deep urgency to fill this gap. However, I was filled with a stream<br>of questions; Is this the right job for me? Will I enjoy the medical field? Will I be able to help the<br>patients of this small town one day? Dr. Fordcy, who was on duty impressed me and sparked my<br>interest in clinical medicine. He was caring, courteous, and provided vital support to all patients.<br>Later, he patiently answered all my questions and stated: \u201cPatient care comes first\u201d. His ways of<br>serving patients introduced me to the medical field.<br>In 2010 I was a victim of an earthquake that unfortunately subjected me indoors for<br>almost a week. Once I was out, I received special care treatment from a Cuban medical doctor.<br>The experience pushed me to volunteer at the main hospital of Port-au-Prince, Haiti. My passion<br>to support patients was further strengthened during my volunteer time at Baptist Health. Last<br>year during the spring, I helped a patient who came from Paris, France. She was unfamiliar with<br>the American medical system and nervous to go to see a doctor. She had high blood pressure and<br>needed immediate attention. I was able to speak the same language with her and earned her trust.<br>Having shared her concerns, I was happy to play an active role in helping her see a doctor. This<br>situation improved my commitment to medicine and solidified my dream to become a physician.<br>In spring 2020 at Florida International University, I was on the Dean\u2019s list with my 4.0<br>GPA for this semester. My mother has always appreciated my continued commitment to<br>excellence and willingness to work hard. She encourages me to continue with the training<br>sessions that I did for my church every two months about improving their healthcare even during<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>the coronavirus pandemic. I understand the plight of people who suffer and their need for<br>doctors\u2019 assistance. Caring for my community is a calling. It goes deeper than just a job or a<br>profession. My goal is to educate and help people in Anse-Rouge which is an area burdened with<br>poor healthcare.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Review and Edit I first walked into a hospital in Anse-Rouge (Haiti), when I was 16 years of age. I hadvisited my brother Billy who had developed a fever and had difficulty breathing. For a hospitalthat had one doctor for thirty patients, I recall many patients went unattended for quite a while.Puzzled with this reality [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[1],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-8132","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-research-paper-writing"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/papersspot.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/8132","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/papersspot.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/papersspot.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/papersspot.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/papersspot.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=8132"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/papersspot.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/8132\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":8133,"href":"https:\/\/papersspot.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/8132\/revisions\/8133"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/papersspot.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=8132"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/papersspot.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=8132"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/papersspot.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=8132"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}