make quite a few improvements on a 3500 word case study

I am a fashion business student and I am looking for someone to rewrite and make quite. a few improvements on a 3500 word case studyand probably some more research needed
unfortunately I have no feed back but. te last website I used did not. do a good job and I would need their work improved on massively as it is quite niche research. I do however have a. checklist to make the grade
The points made were too vague and the English. wasn’t good