The following comments to be incorporated in a paper.
The theoretical foundation can be illustrated briefly in the section providing background information.
Current literature can be added.
How will this paper add value to knowledge in the future? Suggestion: Add some future implications.
The paper fits very well with the theme of the book. However, the author can improvise the methodology consistent with the summary that mentions the sampling frame. The department conducted an extensive literature review on the subject. the paper is review paper but the author described the methodology as research paper. so please revise the methodology as per review paper.
Literature review should be more. mean some extra new literature.
Topics/problems in the paper can be put forward more clearly
Make any serious statement over-emphasis or under-emphasis any problem/issues in the section. Please give a critical and constructive assessment, making suggestions on how the department could be improved and improved in this area. There is no over-or under-emphasis on such issues in the chapter.
The research methodology specified in the abstract will be associated with the article.
Please add some extra reference and up to date references, please suggest relevant references that you consider necessary for the author(s) to include. Reference and citation should be specified as a uniform. It is recommended to include research and references from recent years.