Hi : ) This is a continuation of a previous order. This is the second part.The Prof critique of the first paper was:
Your first paragraph is outside info.Second paragraph is also an outside.Your citations are not MLA.The topic of narrative is good but you focus on emotion more it seems.The paper feels short.I am going to attach the first essay. This assignment is a correction and adding to the first one. I hope this makes since. I am also going to attach the instructions for the second paper. Please let me know if you have any questions.