Please do not use, In conclusion at the end of the essay. And please don’t use things like first, second, lastly. I made a beginning that you can go off of. Valley Forge Essay:The battle at Valley Forge was a time of misery and suffrage. Many reasons contribute to the idea that the time stayed at the camp, was unfortunate. Not only was it winter, but the soldiers had no clothes, food, ammo, and hope. If I was a soldier at Vally Forge, I would have chosen to quit after my enlistment ran out because of the unfairness and harsh living conditions.