Even though this is a good start, it is very far from your objective. Your essay gives very broad overview of what is going on. But I couldn’t see (correct me if I am mistaken) one single number about how much the spending has decreased. You wrote about everything but shopping. Please
– Specify where in the world you are focusing on (or is it the whole world)
– Provide some statistics about decreasing shopping. How much was it before pandemic? How much is it now?
-Which sectors are affected more?
– Provide some charts.
– Who did which part of the project.
You can see me if you need to. Please be more specific.