Can you please revise this to sound like a college paper, more sophisticated, the writer that wrote this made it sound like a high school or junior high paper. MLA FORMAT and here is the question that is to be answered.
Question #5: Write a short narrative of your childhood relationship with a parent or other adult in your life. Choose 1 or 2 key activities or events that can represent the relationship as a whole. Present details that illustrate the original moments and use your adult perspective to reflect and provide coherence.