Chao Wang
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In this draft, I discuss my research’s most important findings in a way that reflects my personal input and my literature review efforts. I believe that the paper possesses some of the following strengths:
First, the paper has been written based on a wide variety of researched articles and learning materials that have enabled it to exhaust extensive areas of the paper’s argument; this has ensured more accountability on the research topic. Secondly, the objective of this research which is to determine and identify relationships between party affiliation and practices of medical aid in dying proves to be an exciting and influential area of study, with many previous scholars evaluating the findings on this subject and would therefore provide meaningful results. Lastly, this paper brings out the discussions around a very controversial topic raising debates under different circumstances; by attempting to remain neutral, the paper attentively presents the importance of this topic in the real-world setting.
With that said, I also believe that the rough draft has some areas that can be further worked on and developed. For example, I would still like to modify some of references, which I would like to integrate into the paper through careful analysis and not just through brief in-text citations. Furthermore, I would like to add several more evidence-backed arguments and information and then skim some of the paper’s unnecessary content. Altogether, I believe that the form possesses a strong foundation but that more evidence and a better flow of arguments are needed. This is what I will undoubtedly be looking forward to achieving by the time I need to submit the final paper.